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Based on emotions nearly ever-present with me... at least they were for a while.
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" title="La la la la"/>I really love the expressiveness of this piece. You did so much with so few words, it's really quite impressive! It's always nice to happen across such a short read that maintains a profound meaning.
The vision is so very clear, and the concept of a hollow clay heart on the brink of shattering is very impactive. This situation is a familiar one for many of us, but you still did a good job at giving it a fresh breath of originality.
Keep up the great work!
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